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This is a part of my movie review of "Ghost". Banker Sam Wheat (Patrick Swayze) and ceramic artists Molly Jensen (Demi Moore) was a pair of lovers. A pity was Sam died in a case of robbery. Molly was very painful of that, so Sam became a ghost and stayed with her. And then, Sam discovered that robbery was an intrigue by his best friend Carl Bruner (Tony Goldwyn). Sam wanted to tell Molly about the murderer, but he could not communicate with anyone. Fortunately, he encountered a psychic Oda Mae Brown (Whoopi Goldbery) when he was despairing. Oda Mae helped him delivered his word to Molly. However, Molly doubted that. She could not believe a ghost really exist.

This is my response of a movie review of "127 hours". David Stratton is the reviewer from "At the Movies". This is a little short review. It begins with a plot summary. It is easy to understand the story, but it is not that interesting. I think the attention getter is always important in the beginning. Readers want to read more or stop to read are depending on the beginning. However, I think I should learn the reviewer how to write a key moment. He describes the key moment that seems authentic and attractive.